18 August 2010

Eyes don’t always see!


It seems to be a rarity
when humans understand:
Fate cannot be ratified,
nor destiny be planned.
People can't begin to know
the things we have in store
For now we mustn't dawdle,
we've been ignorant before.

Eyes are not deceiving to our minds, but to our hearts
They give us room to figure that we're great and that we're smart.
Pupils aren't perceiving of what futures overrule,
Part of being wise is knowing that you're just a fool.


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Blasphemous Aesthete on August 18, 2010 at 8:31 PM said...

on another one for the same entry, I am writing it here too...
I perceive that
"Love is in the air,touch it, let it bloom and grow. Outside you, inside you!"

Ghumakkar Punit on August 18, 2010 at 11:11 PM said...

liked the words...felt the emotion! Nice one! :)

Someone is Special on August 19, 2010 at 10:23 AM said...

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--Someone Is Special--

Anonymous said...

Wonderful shades of words ! :) I loved the last line - wise and true ! :)

Nir on August 20, 2010 at 10:35 AM said...

great wisdom.. softly narrated... very well written.
all the best for ssc and stop by my blog as well

Gauri on August 20, 2010 at 11:49 PM said...

nice poem
ATB for SSC2 :)

Anonymous said...

Nice nice.. :)

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Rocksa on August 21, 2010 at 11:18 AM said...

So totally true! My personal favorite is :

Fate cannot be ratified,
nor destiny be planned.

The ultimate truth couldn't have been expressed any better!

ATB with SSC2 :)

Madman on August 21, 2010 at 11:29 AM said...

As they there is more to it than meets the eye!

Gauri on August 21, 2010 at 10:28 PM said...

I really liked the poem and the flow of thought. You've chosen the words carefully and beautifully!

Goodluck for SSC2!
Feel free to stop by my blog :)

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Hamid on October 4, 2010 at 8:20 AM said...

wow well said.

indeed hearts see what eyes cannot.

Toyin O. on October 25, 2010 at 3:36 AM said...

lovely words.

Anonymous said...

Hey - am new here, on yer blog ie.
A question, if I may ask, have you read Prophet by Khalil Gibran?


Unknown on February 1, 2011 at 12:26 AM said...

Its really amazing and you selection of pic add more colors to your creation. :)

Ophelia on April 22, 2011 at 9:22 PM said...

wise words indeed.

phatichar on May 19, 2011 at 9:25 AM said...

well said.

A.S. on May 19, 2011 at 1:40 PM said...

Nossos olhos nem sempre vêm aquilo que o coração sente!...

Um beijo!

harsh on June 8, 2011 at 7:09 PM said...

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Ayushi on July 21, 2011 at 3:39 PM said...

Nice choice of words :)
Nicely written :)

Daanish on July 23, 2011 at 9:10 PM said...

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