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The darkness
Enclosing,
Suffocating,
Like black satin
Over my mind.
And there is no escape...
The darkness
The silence,
The insanity,
Like poison
Entering my mind.
And there is no escape...
The darkness
The pain,
The cold,
Like ice
Freezing my mind.
And there is no escape...
There is no escape.
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16 comments:
Nice words. You were able to create a dark mood overall. But was there some inner meaning, some metaphorical significance? What are your referring to as the darkness? You had something in mind?
heyyy that was nice!
do keep writing n all the best for ur BATOM!
I am sorry. Couldn't quite get the exact reference. But, loved the flow of it! :)
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Did you think of a tune as well ? This is would make for a fascinating song actually.
Cheers
GB
Liked the flow of words but could not get the essence ..Though it was a wonderful read....
nice blog!!
hi Painter, i did not get the essence much either in the flow.. it was a good read.
all the best for BAT10 :)
Escape
There is no escape only adaptation and choice of survival...
Somehow, i couldnt get ur intention in this poem...may be i didnt read it the way it has to be..
Painter, you did paint well that poem. Nice choice of words.
Sureindran R. - Escape
Hey,
That's one interesting poem. You have used beautiful metaphors. I liked it very much. :)
Cheers!
Nethra
darkness, the way it tempts .We all are attracted to the forbidden.
like black satin*
my fav...
Take care
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There is so much pain
i am in a complete drain
and there is no escape
Nicely penned..I liked it..especially the way you repeated this: there is no escape :)
We all go thru these phases of darkness in our lifes wn v think thrs no escape.. bt thankfully, v finally find an escape :)
for those who cant, its really the end!
a nice read..
Good one. Liked the header of ur blog :)
Amazing..
love it..very talented
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