It seems to be a rarity
when humans understand:
Fate cannot be ratified,
nor destiny be planned.
People can't begin to know
the things we have in store
For now we mustn't dawdle,
we've been ignorant before.
Eyes are not deceiving to our minds, but to our hearts
They give us room to figure that we're great and that we're smart.
Pupils aren't perceiving of what futures overrule,
Part of being wise is knowing that you're just a fool.
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23 comments:
on another one for the same entry, I am writing it here too...
I perceive that
"Love is in the air,touch it, let it bloom and grow. Outside you, inside you!"
liked the words...felt the emotion! Nice one! :)
Wow! Great poem.. You had painted it well..
I wish you all the best for the contest, SSC - II
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Wonderful shades of words ! :) I loved the last line - wise and true ! :)
great wisdom.. softly narrated... very well written.
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nice poem
ATB for SSC2 :)
Perception
Nice nice.. :)
Do check my post as well.. :)
So totally true! My personal favorite is :
Fate cannot be ratified,
nor destiny be planned.
The ultimate truth couldn't have been expressed any better!
ATB with SSC2 :)
As they there is more to it than meets the eye!
I really liked the poem and the flow of thought. You've chosen the words carefully and beautifully!
Goodluck for SSC2!
Perception
Feel free to stop by my blog :)
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wow well said.
indeed hearts see what eyes cannot.
lovely words.
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Hey - am new here, on yer blog ie.
A question, if I may ask, have you read Prophet by Khalil Gibran?
--RP
Its really amazing and you selection of pic add more colors to your creation. :)
wise words indeed.
well said.
Nossos olhos nem sempre vêm aquilo que o coração sente!...
Um beijo!
AL
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Thank you for your generous efforts in constructing this blog & sharing with everyone…
Nice choice of words :)
Nicely written :)
lovely :)
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