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Hidden

Author: The Painter ! | Posted at: Saturday, June 05, 2010 | Filed Under: Kavya, Love, The Painter

...what hides behind tired eyes
broken & tied
to etchings of the past
blinded by misfortune
all painted blue & red
find the heart
beneath this flesh

lying dormant

tucked way beyond bone
making a home
of marrow
shattered hopes to hold
an unfound constant...

20 comments:

Vinay Leo R. on June 5, 2010 at 4:09 PM said...: a very interesting take! :)

Leo - Hidden
Brijender Singh on June 5, 2010 at 8:48 PM said...: Very profound,very pithy.
Sounds like a Homerian tragedy,with all its angst and pain.
Amazing thoughts !
Gauri on June 6, 2010 at 12:56 AM said...: "Find the heart beneath this flesh lying dormant"

Deep. And gr8 stuff!

Good Luck for BATOM 11!

My Blog
Tavish Chadha(sensible-bakwas.com) on June 6, 2010 at 2:29 AM said...: nice short and sweet.. all the best!
Rocksa on June 6, 2010 at 10:20 AM said...: Eyes unfailingly reflect the state of heart. The tired eyes reflecting shattered hopes of an unhappy heart! Emotions are craziest part of human lives! ATB with BAT :)
Raksha - Hidden
aayanman on June 6, 2010 at 11:59 AM said...: very nicely composed.enjoyed reading it.
Anonymous said...: A short dark true hidden post ! ...Lovely written ..all the best for BATOM :)
Tuppence on June 6, 2010 at 8:06 PM said...: Nice one.. Liked your take on the topic.
Emotions , untold dreams and hope hidden within all
us ..
All the best
Er. on June 6, 2010 at 10:49 PM said...: An interesting take. Nature is often hidden, sometimes overcome, seldom extinguished.

All the best for BAT!

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Mahesh Aadhya Kalal on June 7, 2010 at 12:13 AM said...: Hi...
as i am a starter in poetry,i couldn't get the summary of poem...
Could you please explain it?
thanks :)
Sureindran on June 8, 2010 at 7:52 PM said...: Nice poem.

Sureindran R.
www.sureindran.blogspot.com
Priya on June 9, 2010 at 9:52 PM said...: Nicely done.
Rajlakshmi on June 9, 2010 at 11:13 PM said...: a very beautiful write... expressed really well..
Nethra on June 9, 2010 at 11:15 PM said...: I liked every word in it. Very meaningful! :)
Deepika on June 10, 2010 at 2:41 PM said...: Dealt with Hidden, in such a completely different view!! liked it!
Mr. "Niraj" Lemon on June 21, 2010 at 4:48 PM said...: exceptionally welll...just joined ur blog
YAM on June 24, 2010 at 8:59 AM said...: im amazed:)
Dr. Tripat Mehta on June 27, 2010 at 4:09 PM said...: loved ur composition :)

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Sorcerer on June 29, 2010 at 3:57 PM said...: Nice work!
viddhi on July 20, 2010 at 11:10 PM said...: loved it ... truly amazing .. !

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