05 June 2010

Hidden



...what hides behind tired eyes
broken & tied
to etchings of the past
blinded by misfortune
all painted blue & red
find the heart
beneath this flesh


lying dormant
tucked way beyond bone
making a home
of marrow
shattered hopes to hold
an unfound constant...


20 comments:

Leo on June 5, 2010 at 4:09 PM said...

a very interesting take! :)

Leo - Hidden

Brijender Singh on June 5, 2010 at 8:48 PM said...

Very profound,very pithy.
Sounds like a Homerian tragedy,with all its angst and pain.
Amazing thoughts !

gkam on June 6, 2010 at 12:56 AM said...

"Find the heart beneath this flesh lying dormant"

Deep. And gr8 stuff!

Good Luck for BATOM 11!

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Tavish Chadha(sensible-bakwas.com) on June 6, 2010 at 2:29 AM said...

nice short and sweet.. all the best!

Raksha Raman on June 6, 2010 at 10:20 AM said...

Eyes unfailingly reflect the state of heart. The tired eyes reflecting shattered hopes of an unhappy heart! Emotions are craziest part of human lives! ATB with BAT :)
Raksha - Hidden

Gyanban on June 6, 2010 at 11:59 AM said...

very nicely composed.enjoyed reading it.

adreamygal on June 6, 2010 at 3:19 PM said...

A short dark true hidden post ! ...Lovely written ..all the best for BATOM :)

Tuppence on June 6, 2010 at 8:06 PM said...

Nice one.. Liked your take on the topic.
Emotions , untold dreams and hope hidden within all
us ..
All the best

- The Virgin Author! on June 6, 2010 at 10:49 PM said...

An interesting take. Nature is often hidden, sometimes overcome, seldom extinguished.

All the best for BAT!

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Mahesh Kalaal on June 7, 2010 at 12:13 AM said...

Hi...
as i am a starter in poetry,i couldn't get the summary of poem...
Could you please explain it?
thanks :)

Sureindran on June 8, 2010 at 7:52 PM said...

Nice poem.

Sureindran R.
www.sureindran.blogspot.com

Priya on June 9, 2010 at 9:52 PM said...

Nicely done.

Rajlakshmi on June 9, 2010 at 11:13 PM said...

a very beautiful write... expressed really well..

Nethra on June 9, 2010 at 11:15 PM said...

I liked every word in it. Very meaningful! :)

Deeps!! on June 10, 2010 at 2:41 PM said...

Dealt with Hidden, in such a completely different view!! liked it!

Mr. "Niraj" Lemon on June 21, 2010 at 4:48 PM said...

exceptionally welll...just joined ur blog

ambiguous_angel on June 24, 2010 at 8:59 AM said...

im amazed:)

Tripat "Prerna" on June 27, 2010 at 4:09 PM said...

loved ur composition :)

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Sorcerer on June 29, 2010 at 3:57 PM said...

Nice work!

viddhi on July 20, 2010 at 11:10 PM said...

loved it ... truly amazing .. !

 

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