01 May 2010

Escape !



This post has been published by me as a part of the Blog-a-Ton 10; the tenth edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton.


The darkness
Enclosing,
Suffocating,
Like black satin
Over my mind.


And there is no escape...


The darkness
The silence,
The insanity,
Like poison
Entering my mind.


And there is no escape...


The darkness
The pain,
The cold,
Like ice
Freezing my mind.


And there is no escape...


There is no escape.



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18 comments:

The Fool on May 1, 2010 at 6:30 PM said...

Nice words. You were able to create a dark mood overall. But was there some inner meaning, some metaphorical significance? What are your referring to as the darkness? You had something in mind?

PRAVIN NAIR on May 1, 2010 at 6:45 PM said...

heyyy that was nice!

do keep writing n all the best for ur BATOM!

- The Virgin Author! on May 1, 2010 at 8:38 PM said...

I am sorry. Couldn't quite get the exact reference. But, loved the flow of it! :)

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PS: Visit http://bit.ly/shewasenough

Gyanban on May 1, 2010 at 11:08 PM said...

Did you think of a tune as well ? This is would make for a fascinating song actually.
Cheers
GB

Geeta on May 1, 2010 at 11:46 PM said...

Liked the flow of words but could not get the essence ..Though it was a wonderful read....

sakhii•• on May 2, 2010 at 10:53 AM said...

nice blog!!

Leo on May 2, 2010 at 10:53 AM said...

hi Painter, i did not get the essence much either in the flow.. it was a good read.
all the best for BAT10 :)

Escape

Mahesh Kalaal on May 2, 2010 at 3:07 PM said...

There is no escape only adaptation and choice of survival...
Somehow, i couldnt get ur intention in this poem...may be i didnt read it the way it has to be..

Sureindran on May 2, 2010 at 6:13 PM said...

Painter, you did paint well that poem. Nice choice of words.

Sureindran R. - Escape

Nethra on May 2, 2010 at 11:00 PM said...

Hey,

That's one interesting poem. You have used beautiful metaphors. I liked it very much. :)

Cheers!
Nethra

rainboy on May 3, 2010 at 8:36 AM said...

darkness, the way it tempts .We all are attracted to the forbidden.


like black satin*
my fav...


Take care

http://smellofearthafterrain.blogspot.com/

Karan Shah on May 3, 2010 at 9:33 PM said...

There is so much pain
i am in a complete drain

and there is no escape

Avada Kedavra on May 6, 2010 at 1:34 PM said...

Nicely penned..I liked it..especially the way you repeated this: there is no escape :)

Shilpa on May 6, 2010 at 6:37 PM said...

Nice post :)

Vipul Grover on May 7, 2010 at 1:20 AM said...

We all go thru these phases of darkness in our lifes wn v think thrs no escape.. bt thankfully, v finally find an escape :)
for those who cant, its really the end!
a nice read..

ambiguous_angel on May 7, 2010 at 6:52 PM said...

nice:)

Shas on May 25, 2010 at 2:46 AM said...

Good one. Liked the header of ur blog :)

Nasra on July 30, 2010 at 5:31 AM said...

Amazing..

love it..very talented

ps. follow me :)

 

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